Sunday, October 3, 2010

RD 2- Wait There’s More! - How Advertising Affects Our Lives.

Thomas Akiyama
Oct 4, 2010
RD2

Wait There’s More! - How Advertising Affects Our Lives.

The impact of advertisements on our daily lives has created a new sense of idealism, based on materialism and false information. Advertisements took root in our day-by-day use of television, posters, billboards and any type of media available. The economic impact generated a large amount of money through global industries and provided a foundation for products and services to reach any consumer. The main effect on society is how it influences us to buy a product over another, which manipulates our judgment. Many believe advertisements including commercials and paper ads are causing a negative effect on our lives and implore the use of controversial statements and claims to convince the purchaser to acquire the item or service. [THESIS] The statement, “In general, ads or commercials ultimately have a negative impact on our lives” is true and the reasoning for my judgment along with how ads affect society including a pros and cons analysis will be conversed. [THESIS]

POM Wonderful LLC has been supplying the public for nearly a decade with 100% pomegranate juice marketed under the brand, POM Wonderful Pomegranate Juice. In a small video clip advertisement, I found while reading a New York Times online article last Thursday, a picture of the POM juice bottle appeared in a small room with a light gray background. A woman in her 50s’ dressed in workout clothes, a red tank-top and shorts, sluggishly walked over to the bottle and picked it up subsequently drinking the bottle and quickly began to revert her age to about her mid 20s’. After ingesting the entire bottle the younger woman smiled and said, “New research offers further proof of the heart-healthy benefits of POM wonderful juice, so drink up to a longer, healthier heart!” Then she swiftly ran toward the gray background, which instantaneously changed into a brightly lit park scene filled with people exercising and smiling. The implication is that if I drink POM juice, I will literally become a younger more energetic person. This is a hasty generalization since the advertisement is basing the evidence on the result of one person, the woman in the video (Quick). Furthermore, another logical fallacy in this ad is a non sequitur since it does not necessarily follow that I will have the same consequence as the woman. Her age reduction is overly exaggerative and a product of film editing. The assumption that POM juice will regress your age can influence an individual in spending his or her money to produce results that are physically impossible. Due to the nature of POM juice’s claims in its advertising, the Federal Trade Commission (FTC) has cited several complaints against the company (Fredrix). POM Wonderful LLC has currently halted many marketing commercials and advertisements containing claims on the POM juice health benefits.

A statement made by Liza Nordin in the Laulima discussion, “Yes, Ads Have Negative Impact!” complements my findings that ads ultimately have an adverse effect on society. Nordin writes, “Advertising encourages the conspicuous consumption and materialism so prevalent in our modern society…” which reveals how it influences individuals to consume a product that they do not necessary need. Excessive promotion for products and services can directly affect the environment through marketing waste such as promotional paper goods. Advertisements also can affect the environment indirectly as the individual continues to buy more items and discards previously bought commodities. Nordin also describes her view of how advertising and materialism are linked together through the unnecessary need for more products. Gathering more products to satisfy the expectations of how you want others in society to view you can cause individuals to become a slave to the mass media marketing. Another issue related to Nordin’s quote is increasing debt problems, which people then run into financial troubles. However the issue of advertising and its impact on our lives creates two sides toward the argument.

In the Laulima discussion, “No, Ads Don't Have a Negative Impact!” Gregory Jenkins writes how ads create an identity and lifestyle with what we buy as consumers. Jenkins states, “Advertising leading to society’s alignment with consumer brands is an endorsement of positive freedoms...” which is skewed since it is based on the logically fallacy of ad populum. In Jenkin’s testimony on the positive effects of advertising, he is appealing to the emotions of people by utilizing certain terms such as positive freedoms, which construct an idealistic barrier. The term freedom is associated with independence and an expression of uniqueness, however in his argument he asserts that ads build an identity to which we correlate with others. This can conceive limitations in how we express freedom since if we buy a certain product that others are not particularly fond of, we usually change it based on another’s opinion. Jenkins also implies that branding oneself is a typical thing we do to create our own identity. The formation of an identity through the brands we choose from advertisements limit our accessibility to others. If one identifies with a higher monetary value brand such as a Ferrari automobile, he or she is more likely to have friends with similar tastes in expensive goods. Nonetheless, advertising does have some positive impacts on our lives.

The positive impact of advertising is seen through its effects on prices and variety of assorted goods and services. Advertising a product or service allows the seller to have a better chance of persuading a consumer to purchase, which generates revenue for the business to pay its employees. The concept of competition amongst various advertisements allows individuals additional choices therefore permitting more opportunities. Advertising is also a tool used by many consumers to judge which product stands out and performs more effectively. The type of advertisement can be conveyed, as a positive impact on us is informational advertising in health-related issues and products. An example is a public service announcement on the health benefits of quitting smoking, which offers information rather then marketing a certain product.

The statement, “In general, ads or commercials ultimately have a negative impact on our lives” has been proved true through my finding on its impacts on daily lives. The effects on society are mainly seen in a negative direction since advertising can involve many logical fallacies such as the hasty generalizations and non-sequiturs. The POM juice advertisement previously discussed comprises of a hasty generalization made by the content of the commercial. In spite of these negative attributions, ads do have a few positive acknowledgements for instance, the competition it creates among products and service, which influence prices. Advertisements initiate individuals to think beyond the product and give us choices that influence our lives on a daily basis.

Works Cited:

Fredrix, Emily. “FTC says POM juice ads are deceptive about health.” Yahoo! News.
27 Sept. 2010. 28 Sept. 2010. [http://news.yahoo.com/s/ap/20100927/ap_on_bi_ge/us_pom_wonderful_ftc_complaint].

Jenkins, Gregory. “No, Ads Don't Have a Negative Impact!” Online posting. 23 Sept.
2010. Laulima Discussion. 1 Oct. 2010.
[https://laulima.hawaii.edu/portal/site/KAP.XLSENG215js.201110].

Nordin, Liza. “Yes, Ads Have Negative Impact!” Online posting. 22 Sept. 2010.
Laulima Discussion. 30 Sept. 2010.
[https://laulima.hawaii.edu/portal/site/KAP.XLSENG215js.201110].

“Quick Review for Logical Fallacies.” ENG 215W. 6 Jan. 2009. 1 Oct. 2010.
[http://eng215kcc.wordpress.com/2009/01/06/quick-review-of-logical-fallacies-2/].

3 comments:

  1. Hey Thomas. Good job with your RD2. After reading through it several times I had the following comments:

    The draft is readable and free of any strange characters. Your paper addresses the assignment topic and takes a firm stand throughout most of the paper. However, your concluding paragraph may need more work as your final thought ends with how ads are beneficial. Perhaps you should consider mentioning your discussion of the positives of ads earlier in the paragraph but making sure to note your negative overall opinion of them. The way you end your paper is off just because almost the entire paper you talk about how ads are a negative influence, but in the last sentences you say but they are good. Your paper is complete with a works cited section, and exceeds the minimum word count.

    Although it is obvious you put effort into revising your paper, you missed some minor problems such as word choice grammatical errors, run-on sentences, and citation parenthesis content (e.g. “Quick” reference). Your paper is good on both formatting and spacing. As required the paper is complete with a name, date, assignment and unique title. Your thesis statement (although a little more verbose than it can be) is clear in its message and supported in your body and mostly in your conclusion (as previously discussed).

    Overall, your paper fulfilled its purpose to present an intelligent argument for the negative impact of ads. I particularly liked your use of the POM Wonderful ads as they fit in perfectly with your argument and the complaints to the FTC really solidified the deceptive nature of the ads.

    Hopefully this eval of your paper will help to further improve your essay for FD2 and I look forward to reading the finished product. Good luck!

    Sincerely,

    Russell Romano-Kelly

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  2. Hi Thomas,
    I think you did an excellent job on your paper. You supported your thesis very well, and you used your advertisement and words in a very effective way. I especially liked the advertisement you chose, and you you explained it in such good detail I was able to envision it as I read. Also you did a nice job discussing the pros and cons of advertising, you explained the cons effectively and the pros as well. I didn't find too many problems with your paper except I noticed a few grammatical errors. Other than that I enjoyed your paper thanks for letting me review!

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  3. Hi Thomas I'm so sorry but I posted the previous comment and posted it anonymously so I'm commenting to say it was me!

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